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Nice!

Cool story Shadow! Perhaps a little nervous tension by Tiffany, to offset the experienced Emma will add to the drama!

I can't wait for the next chapter! Very Happy
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Post Tue Apr 08, 2008 1:40 am 
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Mister Mistoffelees
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And just how did I know...

...that Tiffany would be useless in a crisis? Amusing, but useless...

The game's afoot again, Shadow, and you have me breathlessly waiting for more...
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Post Fri Apr 11, 2008 6:29 pm 
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Shadow
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Grovelling apologies....

.... for not being on of late. Sad First it was long shifts, then to add misery to mayhem, my PC went and died! After only six years of use, it conked out on Saturday. Only got a replacement today, and still trying to get my head around this Windows Vista... Shocked


But I shall get back to Crimes of Fashion, never fear! Wink
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Post Tue Apr 29, 2008 5:19 pm 
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Re: Grovelling apologies....

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Originally posted by Shadow:
.... for not being on of late. Sad First it was long shifts, then to add misery to mayhem, my PC went and died! After only six years of use, it conked out on Saturday. Only got a replacement today, and still trying to get my head around this Windows Vista... Shocked


But I shall get back to Crimes of Fashion, never fear! Wink


Always no worries... take your time! Wink
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Shadow
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Rejoice!

For finally a new chapter of Crime of Fashion! Shocked Yes, it has been way too long.... Embarassed Honestly, I must apologize for the delay here. Will do better for the next one! Rolling Eyes
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Post Mon Jun 02, 2008 1:57 pm 
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Re: Rejoice!

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Originally posted by Shadow:
For finally a new chapter of Crime of Fashion! Shocked Yes, it has been way too long.... Embarassed Honestly, I must apologize for the delay here. Will do better for the next one! Rolling Eyes


No worries, it's worth the wait. And I see Tiffany is taught a lesson... Wink
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Emma sure handled Tiffany well enough... Wink

Your story still engages even with the long breaks, so please don't sweat it, Shadow. Smile

Of course I am eagerly waiting for more (hopefully soon). Wink
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Post Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:24 pm 
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Mister Mistoffelees
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Ah-hah!...

...I see Tiffany has leaked some vital information! I sure hope Bethan is listening in!...

Let's see...maybe Mrs. Ambers is in on the abduction, and had Tiffany abducted as a blind. Or perhaps she is being paid out for her efforts to clear away Tiffany's competition. Or...maybe we better just wait for you to spin your tale to your own ends, old bean! I can tell you I for one am enjoying it!...
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Shadow
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And before you start...

Embarassed I know I should get Crime of Fashion finished, but kind of got stuck! That and no free time so I haven't even got round to reading the new chapters others have posted, even the new tale from Bluegag. But I will, I will:( And then this idea kicked in and well... you know how it is! Rolling Eyes Common story telling sense goes out of the window! Confused


Anyway, Not How it Seems may change its title soon. Possibly to The Trojan Niece.... Keep an eye out on that! Wink
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Post Mon Jun 23, 2008 7:37 pm 
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Mister Mistoffelees
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Now, Shadow...

...you're talking to the chap who once tried to juggle three tales at once, and who may try it again! I understand the instinct perfectly...

"Trojan Niece" might be a good title, especially if what I'm suspecting is what WEAPON has planned! I see wheels within wheels, old bean! Insofar as the League may in fact know their courier has been compromised, and be waiting for MI6--or WEAPON--to make a move against them! Or, the whole dead-courier thing might in fact be a frame-up to entice WEAPON into making a move! In any case, I'd guess that Emma is getting herself into something that may be way over her head! To our reading delight! Fine start as always, old bean!...
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Re: Now, Shadow...

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Originally posted by Mister Mistoffelees:
...you're talking to the chap who once tried to juggle three tales at once, and who may try it again! I understand the instinct perfectly...

"Trojan Niece" might be a good title, especially if what I'm suspecting is what WEAPON has planned! I see wheels within wheels...



Actually... I may remove what's already been posted for something different. 8) To be honest, I'm trying to keep to a certain frame of story telling but this idea for The Trojan Niece (aye, it WILL be called that! Shocked ) does make me want to adjust exactly what I normally do. So bear with me as I re-write what I've done, and the new version will be up shortly with the existing one removed. The ideas used so far will be kept, but not in the way they've been done.... Confused


Of course, that is if I get the free time.... Crying or Very sad Now if you'll excuse me folks, I'm just off to save all the new stuff we've got up and have a good read! Very Happy
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Not How It Seems...

Looks like a new promising undercover mission...

And Shadow, NO worries, there is no pressure. Take your time and write
when you have the inspiration. You'll do fine... Very Happy
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Post Wed Jun 25, 2008 1:23 am 
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Another new dangerous mission for the team (what else would there be?) Wink

Looking forward to reading this one! Very Happy
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Post Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:54 pm 
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Well...

...your call on the repost, Shadow, but I do have to say I for one liked the way you had it started...
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Post Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:27 am 
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Yes, I'm still around

Just been having a major problem with writer's block Crying or Very sad Really major, and really blocked. But I will be posting soon, have no fear. Have to. It's bloody rude in not finishing off my scribblings!
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Post Sat Jun 06, 2009 5:21 pm 
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Hey Shadow... long time no hear! Very Happy

Glad to find out you're still lurking around. And I hope your case of severe writer's block has been cured (you still got me hooked with your Fashion story).
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Post Sun Jun 07, 2009 11:58 pm 
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Mister Mistoffelees
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I second Ashley here...

...and tell you to get off your tochis and finish the tale! WEAPON needs to make a comeback!...
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Re: Yes, I'm still around

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Just been having a major problem with writer's block Crying or Very sad Really major, and really blocked. But I will be posting soon, have no fear. Have to. It's bloody rude in not finishing off my scribblings!


No pressure. Pressure brings nerves. And nervousness inhibits creativity. Take your time and relax... those ideas will come...
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Shadow, I've been perusing your stories (still not finished yet!), so I apologize for being absent from this particular domicile. However, I agree with Deanna - take your time, and don't rush greatness! Smile
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Tag Challenge with Moxx!

I'm reading the Tag Challenge, written with Moxx.

"We'll be back in Geneva faster than you can say [some welsh-gaelic crap]."

Are those actual words or just gibberish?
What do they mean, or are you going to make me break out Babelfish for this?
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