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Mulder
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It took me long enough, but there is the epic conclusion to story #8. Again, sorry for the never-ending delays but I hope to start writing again soon. The next story will probably move away from New Hamilton for a bit while I figure out where the overarching plot is going to go next.

So look for the next story (whenever that will happen) to be over the in the Superheroine Forum with Fire Team Charlie #4. Until then, enjoy the update.
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Post Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:56 am 
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detwriter
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Exciting finish!

I like the way the team came together to win the final battle...

And take your time on the next story hun, I too have been having trouble with my word program.
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darial04
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I finished reading your conclusion earlier, and I have to say it's one of my favorites from you, Mulder. Well done! Very Happy

I look foward to reading more from the girls of New Hamilton. However, in the meantime, good luck with your superhero tale.
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It takes a deft touch...

...to combine paintball and romance! With a little sleuthing thrown in on teh side... Fine wrap-up, old bean! Enjoyed it heartily!
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Orpheus Kai
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Hey Mulder, I'm getting caught up in your forum now (at last, I'm so sorry! Crying or Very sad ). And from what I've read, I can tell I'm going to enjoy it here!

It'll take me awhile, so please bear with me.
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valkyrie
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I made it up to Code Zebra so far. I'd been thinking Zach's pills were a steroid metaphor, and then they as much as say the same thing in that story.
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