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Originally posted by cathy north:
Hey!!! I want to be a member of the Bluegag Society too.

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Originally posted by Mister Mistoffelees:
(raising my hand and doing my best Ronald Horshack impersonation)--

I know this! I know this! A locker! Am I right? Huh? Huh? Huh?...

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Originally posted by cathy north:
Hey!!! I want to be a member of the Bluegag Society too.

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Me too, Me too!
I just finished "First Case". The mask over the gag and the hands-in-pockets disguise was pretty clever, the permission slip to be kidnapped was just too funny.

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That Calvin sure comes in handy in a tight bind.

I agree with Mr. M that the code must be a locker, but what could be in it if it is?... Perhaps the screaming banshee?

Looks like the membership into the Bluegag Society is growing...
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Originally posted by darial04:
That Calvin sure comes in handy in a tight bind.

I agree with Mr. M that the code must be a locker, but what could be in it if it is?... Perhaps the screaming banshee?

Looks like the membership into the Bluegag Society is growing...

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Another Halloween Story is posted. I want to thank all of you for yyour patience and hpe that you enjoy the ending.
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Your quite welcome, Dave... and thank you for finishing it!

Calvin as a human being is something I'm not sure I can get used to, I loved him as a roaming spirit causing all sorts of mayhem and mischief (your climatic scene with Jackson was captivating with the ghosts pestering him).

I wonder, will we see another story featuring Mandy, Cindy, and Ashley (with Calvin in tow, I imagine), or will there be a return of the Jepperson sisters?

Either way, I am looking forward to your next adventure!
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...I didn't expect! Calvin as a human again? And with Mandy? Very nice twist, Dave! And who knows what they'll find if they dig up Yankee Stadium?...
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I just didn't have the heart, after all of the good things Calvin did for Mandy, to leave him as a ghoulish figure. That doesn't mean, that if he wanted to, Tabitha could turn him back if he misbehaved.

Ashley, I am not sure at this point if there is going to be another story any time soon. I just haven't been inspired with any cleaver plots involving either of the series. I will however continue to enjoy your stories, and of cours, the same goes for you my prolific Mr. M.
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Originally posted by Mister Mistoffelees:
...I didn't expect! Calvin as a human again? And with Mandy? Very nice twist, Dave! And who knows what they'll find if they dig up Yankee Stadium?...

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What a sweet ending, Bluegag! Calvin as a human again was such a charming way to finish your latest, and with Mandy of all people! Truly brought a smile to my face.

And I agree with Ashley, convincing Jackson to turn himself in was done brilliantly. Well done!

Oh, what does it take/involve/cost to join the Bluegag Society? Do I get perks? A Stacey plushie doll? A cool hat?


(I'll also have that Stacey reflection bit up soon, I've been ridiculously busy and it takes awhile to rattle the mind enough. Plus I want to go back and re-read a bit of it, to get my bearings again - so yeah, I'm sorry!)
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Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
What a sweet ending, Bluegag! Calvin as a human again was such a charming way to finish your latest, and with Mandy of all people! Truly brought a smile to my face.

And I agree with Ashley, convincing Jackson to turn himself in was done brilliantly. Well done!

Oh, what does it take/involve/cost to join the Bluegag Society? Do I get perks? A Stacey plushie doll? A cool hat?


(I'll also have that Stacey reflection bit up soon, I've been ridiculously busy and it takes awhile to rattle the mind enough. Plus I want to go back and re-read a bit of it, to get my bearings again - so yeah, I'm sorry!)

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You got it, Dave. Since I'll have time tomorrow, I'll do it then. I'm just a very busy/lazy person

Edit: Okay, I've got a few hours to myself, so I looked over the cases again. Stacy's exploits are fresh in my mind, so here we go.

I love the dynamic relationship between Stacy and her mom, first off. The idea of a retired girl detective dealing with her daughter's budding sleuthing career is a really clever one, and I'm kicking myself in the shin that I didn't think of it first! It's that loving/clashing relationship between them that really adds charm to your works, and they really sell the stories. Plus, Stacy's such a likable character - she's got a knack for girl-detectivin', yet she's also wary of how her mom might feel towards it, knowing full well that it makes her worry. Really nice touches!

As for your stories, I love how you mix third-person narratives with first-person. Not only are we allowed glimpses into Stacy's head and thoughts, but you're also able to craft "Meanwhile..." situations that give us much more depth into the overall picture, showing us what Stacy's friends are doing, what the villains are doing, etc. It makes for a much more engrossing narrative overall, and it gives you a lot more room to play with what's going on. That's always fun

Your stories also keep me guessing! There are points where I stop reading to try and figure out your clues, or what's going to happen next. Specifically, The Waitress. Excellent clue-dropping keeps your reader guessing, and that's always yummy.

Phew. Hope that was okay!
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Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
You got it, Dave. Since I'll have time tomorrow, I'll do it then. I'm just a very busy/lazy person

Edit: Okay, I've got a few hours to myself, so I looked over the cases again. Stacy's exploits are fresh in my mind, so here we go.

I love the dynamic relationship between Stacy and her mom, first off. The idea of a retired girl detective dealing with her daughter's budding sleuthing career is a really clever one, and I'm kicking myself in the shin that I didn't think of it first! It's that loving/clashing relationship between them that really adds charm to your works, and they really sell the stories. Plus, Stacy's such a likable character - she's got a knack for girl-detectivin', yet she's also wary of how her mom might feel towards it, knowing full well that it makes her worry. Really nice touches!

As for your stories, I love how you mix third-person narratives with first-person. Not only are we allowed glimpses into Stacy's head and thoughts, but you're also able to craft "Meanwhile..." situations that give us much more depth into the overall picture, showing us what Stacy's friends are doing, what the villains are doing, etc. It makes for a much more engrossing narrative overall, and it gives you a lot more room to play with what's going on. That's always fun

Your stories also keep me guessing! There are points where I stop reading to try and figure out your clues, or what's going to happen next. Specifically, The Waitress. Excellent clue-dropping keeps your reader guessing, and that's always yummy.

Phew. Hope that was okay!

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I enjoyed this story... the time travel and learning from the past is fresh and innovative for this site... keep up the good works!
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