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Poor Jordan...

At least her feet will be comfy....

Cool chapter Cathy!
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Post Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:17 pm 
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cathy north
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Deanna..........the last thing I thought about was her feet. But you're right. I'm glad you noticed, and commented. It matters you did.

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Deanna..........the last thing I thought about was her feet. But you're right. I'm glad you noticed, and commented. It matters you did.

C


And this last chapter... I don't want to give it away but someone is trying to hide something? Wink

Most interesting.
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Post Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:59 pm 
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Quinlan...

Interesting name... to the rescue!

Check out my latest chapter... the last line just for you! Wink
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Nice little mystery you have there Cathy Very Happy I just started to catch up on your stories. And btw, you I see you got an avatar, glad I could help Very Happy
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Hi Cathy!

Sorry I've been away, but I got caught up on your latest tale, and it's another good one. Very Happy

I do hope Courtney knows what she's getting herself into (but with Madison now free, will she able to help out still?).

Glad to see that you finally got an avatar (and I nice one, too).
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Post Sun Aug 09, 2009 2:29 am 
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Yes Mirage you were the one that led me in the right direction. I'm so happy now. Felt like a sunderhead not having an avatar, To think, in the end, it was so easy (with help). Again thanks.

Daria......happy you read my stories. I follow the Spencer girls as you know.
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So, I wonder who this Binder is and what the Blue Ribbons could have done to her to turn her so vengeful! Shocked I guess we'll find out soon enough though now that Court is one of them. Really suspenseful read, Cathy! Very Happy

( You see how I just jumped in like that, like I've been making comments here forever, thereby completely steamrolling the fact that this is in reality my very first comment here. Wink )

btw, you FINALLY figured out how to load an avatar. Laughing I really like it. Who is she? looks a little like Claire Danes.
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Post Sat Aug 15, 2009 7:28 am 
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Very happy to read your comments. Laura. Please feel free to 'stop by' anytime. As far as the avatar goes it was a struggle for various reasons and Mirage was the one most responsible. I don't know who the girl with the flashlight is. It's from photobucket and I merely typed in NANCY DREW and this was one of the images. Nothing magic about an avatar now that I know how to do it.
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Cathy, ma'am. I'm sorry for my idiot mistake in my forum's comments post. And f you don't know what I'm talking about, then let's...keep it...that way. Yeah...

So, I'm catching up all over the place lately, and I'm going to start reading your stuff next! So, I'll post as soon as I'm done. Though it'll be awhile, sorry Sad
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Post Mon Aug 17, 2009 4:33 am 
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If the secret society members wear their ribbons on their bras, does this mean they have to flash one another to prove their membership? Shocked
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If the secret society members wear their ribbons on their bras, does this mean they have to flash one another to prove their membership? Shocked


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Post Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:55 am 
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First I want to correct something I inadventantly implied. I was talking about how difficult it was to have an avatar and said "Mirage was the one most responsible". Gulp!! I meant to say Mirage was the one most responsible for my finally having a avatar. She certainly wasn't to blame for the difficulties. Sorry Mirage for accidently implying that. You're my hero.

Mr. Kai, everything is fine. I didn't notice anything you said as being idiotic.

Oh Laura. Embarassed Of course the girls don't flash each other. They see enough of each others Shocked in the locker room. Or in the dorm corridor. This is an all girl school after all.

Daria. Heavens!!
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Poor Colleen!

Being captured and wondering if it's the kidnapper outside the door!
I hope the Sister has some Tylenol...

Excellent chapter Cathy!
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Chapter 13

Excellent rope work Cathy! You've gotten the hang of this!
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Post Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:19 am 
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Why thank you Deanna. Practice , practice, practice.
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quote:
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Why thank you Deanna. Practice , practice, practice.


Be sure to check out my chapter six in our story... there is a present for you! Wink
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Post Thu Oct 29, 2009 4:14 pm 
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Loved how Naomi waylaid Coutrney and the whole "taunting her while she's unconscious" bit! Great tie up scene too! Cathy, there's only one way I can sum this up:

"Perfecto!"
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Post Fri Oct 30, 2009 12:56 am 
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cathy north
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Why thank you Laura. I enjoyed writing that scene (no surprise there).

Oh Deanna, your 'present' was very much appreciated and it was thoughtful of you. Of course you and I are the only ones that suspect what it was. (maybe). Laura might guess. She just might. Anyway, it goes with the territory if you're a girl detective, doesn't it?.
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Post Fri Oct 30, 2009 1:51 pm 
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Cathy, you ain't kidding when it comes to knocking out people! First Courtney. Now Celeste! I got a feeling that Naomi's going to be seeing stars in the not too distant future! Wink

Your latest chapter was simply adorable. A-DOR-A-BLE! Very Happy Your dialogue was cute, cute, cute! ("She likes tie up. Is that a big deal?" "Phtttt. That was just pretend. We're going to e-s-c-a-p-e.") Very Happy

Can't wait for the next chapter, Cath! Hopefully, by then, poor Celeste will have woken up and had a change to fix her slip. Embarassed

(psst- I sent you a PM. Just giving you a heads up.)
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Post Wed Nov 18, 2009 6:26 am 
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(this is a chapter 11 revision of sorts)

"Courtney retreats to her room to put on her jogging clothes. Normally the wardrobe consists of her blue spandix volleyball shorts and a gray singlet top. All joggers know that you dress as if it was twenty degrees warmer since even on cool days once you get going the body heats up very rapidly. But there was a cooler than normal east wind so Courtney opted for a powder blue, Under Armour top. It was long sleeved top with gray stripes down the sleeves and the SMOG mascot's head, the gray fox at the left breast. Many times she wore looser fitting shorts for greater leg freedom but the warmth of the spandex won out so she pulled them on and out the door she went."

I suppose some may wonder why the above addition. Just cause *giggle*. By the way I do run, just like Courtney. Rather proud of my 4 marathons and many, many 10Ks. Please allow me that little bit of vanity Wink
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