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darial04
Nancy Drew/Author

Joined: 12 Aug 2005
Posts: 1176
Location: New England |
My "issues" have turned rather serious now as my grandmother is not doing well at all. The doctor thinks she may have only weeks or months left. And I've been sick over the past two weeks, and I haven't been able to see her in the hospital due to her weakened condition, so these past couple of weeks haven't been very good at all.
Anyway, I wanted to at least post something during all this to give you guys an answer as to what happens next in the story.
Orpheus... Thanks for the well wishes.
Mr. M... Dear friend, thanks so much for the condolences.
Laura... Thanks for the compliment on my new "title".
Suzy... Glad to hear back from you, and I'm happy you're enjoying Stacey's solo story so far.
I'll try to get back to reading everything that I've missed in small doses, and to get this story still on track. My illness is getting better, I just wished my grandmother was.
Anyway, the big reveal is posted as Madeline explains what she's up to, to her captive audience. And Mike gets dragged into the action...
Enjoy!  _________________ "You won't get away with this!"
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:26 pm |
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cresent34
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Joined: 12 Oct 2008
Posts: 227
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Classic scene: the villain reveals all to their captive protagonists..who can't do anything but watch helplessly as they set their diabolical plot in motion. Although, the fact they're not in some ridiculous death-trap means that Madeline may have something else in store for our poor snoops.. _________________ There's no escape for you this time...
---Tanya Nightshade, my villainess OC
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:20 pm |
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laura silverman
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Joined: 03 Apr 2009
Posts: 182
Location: River Hills, OH |
My most heartfelt hopes for you and your grandmother, Ashley. Don't worry about us or your story. Really. _________________ We got her, boss! What do you want us to do with her!
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Sun Oct 11, 2009 11:21 pm |
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Mister Mistoffelees
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Joined: 12 Apr 2005
Posts: 1435
Location: The land of Snowden... |
Yes indeed, cresent...
...you'd think Madame DiPietro would remember that particular part of The Villains' Creed--the one where you never tell your victims the whole plan in advance...
But Mike is on his way, and I don;t think Madame wants to have him take after her! I'd say something about hitting a lady, but we already know she's no lady!...and you have to admit that Ashley really knows how to cook up a revenge plot! If you want revenge, get it big time!
And Ashley, dear heart, you know that I and a couple Conjuring Kittens are thinking about you... _________________ Welcome to Snowden! Enter at your own risk...
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Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:04 am |
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Orpheus Kai
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Joined: 30 Oct 2008
Posts: 648
Location: Where I can see you... |
Ashley, I hope you get well soon. And I'm so sorry to hear about your grandma, too Like Laura said, don't worry about us. Take as much time as you need, okay?
I'm loving your latest chapters, Howard and Mike make such an amazing team - I'm excited to see them in action! And what a shocking revelation, DiPietro...I knew you were slimy, but that...just, wow. And Stacey's a resourceful one, using her engagement ring as a marker. Cle-ver!
Killer work! _________________ ------------
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Chloe: All my work is fiction. Any names or places that relate to things in real life are fiction and liable of coincide-mpph!!
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detwriter
Co-Administrator

Joined: 12 Apr 2005
Posts: 1169
Location: Watertown, USA |
Stacey and Vivian...
I sure hope they can escape to save the day... that cyanide is serious stuff!
I also hope you are feeling better Ashley! _________________ Happy Snooping!
From Deanna and Tracey
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detwriter
Co-Administrator

Joined: 12 Apr 2005
Posts: 1169
Location: Watertown, USA |
Yeah Mike and Howard
To the rescue! Now if they can all avert that pending disaster!
Well done Ashley! _________________ Happy Snooping!
From Deanna and Tracey
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Thu Oct 29, 2009 4:19 pm |
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Mulder
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Joined: 17 Dec 2005
Posts: 240
Location: Connecticut. |
I see the roster of main characters has expanded significantly since when you started! Good luck with your grandmother, you'll have lots of good karma for that. _________________ The truth is still out there. Will you be the one who finds it?
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Wed Nov 11, 2009 4:54 pm |
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Lars Beckert
Celebrity Guest Villain

Joined: 13 Apr 2005
Posts: 154
Location: Lurking in the shadows |
If you ask me ...
Ms. DiPietro is definitely a hero for our times. Not only is she trying to rid the world of a couple of silly little girls, but some overblown "fashionistas" at the same time. That deserves a Presidential citation at the very least.
P.S. Anyone else not surprised that so far the so-called "heroes" have committed grand theft auto, assault and battery, and destruction of private property?
--Lars _________________ Little girls should be seen and not heard ... that's why I keep a gag handy.
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Thu Nov 12, 2009 3:42 am |
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Orpheus Kai
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Joined: 30 Oct 2008
Posts: 648
Location: Where I can see you... |
Wow, all the major players have kicked some form of tuchus up to this point! Excellent fight between Mike and Dupree, I had a feeling they would go at it! But man, Dupree was nasty...that guy fights dirty, and I seriously feel bad for poor Mike (I guarantee Stacey will think he still looks sexy though, just you watch). I'm glad that chump was taken down hard.
Awesome twist with Vivian, too - here I thought she was helpless and too afraid of fighting, but DAMN was I wrong! And that little jab at the end was a nice touch, though I did cringe...
Can't wait to see Stacey take down DiPietro. It's been a long time coming, and she deserves some compensation for all the crap she's been through  _________________ ------------
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Chloe: All my work is fiction. Any names or places that relate to things in real life are fiction and liable of coincide-mpph!!
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Sat Nov 21, 2009 2:47 pm |
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Lars Beckert
Celebrity Guest Villain

Joined: 13 Apr 2005
Posts: 154
Location: Lurking in the shadows |
I certainly hope ...
... that Mike, Vivian, and Lynda have good attorneys, since they're certainly going to need them for the criminal charges and civil lawsuits that are certain to be filed, after the way they assaulted Ms. DiPietro's associates (who were only engaged in carrying out their lawful duties). Especially the cowardly sneak attacks by Vivian and Lynda ... what shameful conduct on the part of these so-called "heroes".
--Lars _________________ Little girls should be seen and not heard ... that's why I keep a gag handy.
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laura silverman
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Joined: 03 Apr 2009
Posts: 182
Location: River Hills, OH |
OH GAWD! The image of DiPietro beating feet down 5th Avenue! But, she DID manage to stay ahead of Stacey, wearing heels at that! I bet Ms. D was quite the track star in school.
That was a nice trick Stace pulled at the end and the look on DiPietro's face was to die for. And I enjoyed everyone's athleticism: Stacey hurtling over the turnstiles, DiPietro's running, Vivian's kickass (literally!) badassness, and Mike's Rocky Balboa-ness. And let's not forget Howard's 60 second primping skills. Believe me, that's the most impressive of all!
Totally agree with the Moxx about Howard and Mike making a great team. TV series anyone? Style Network, hello?!
A terrific ending to another fabulicious tale, Ashley!  _________________ We got her, boss! What do you want us to do with her!
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