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kinder06
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 Solo and new Chapter of Martha Byrne

hi everyone I hope you enjoyed the ending to Camp.

Now I have a new Chapter of Martha Byrne and a preveiw of new story with Mary-An nas the main character.

It is called Solo I hope all will enjoy this story.
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Orpheus Kai
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Nice dual update Kinder! And Solo is looking to be quite an interesting tale - kidnapped nuclear scientists usually spell disaster in so many ways. Wonder how Mary-Ann will do on her first case alone when it's a big'un?
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Post Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:23 pm 
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kinder06
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 well soon

quote:
Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Nice dual update Kinder! And Solo is looking to be quite an interesting tale - kidnapped nuclear scientists usually spell disaster in so many ways. Wonder how Mary-Ann will do on her first case alone when it's a big'un?


Well soon find out.
Very Happy
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I agree with Mr. O, a nuclear scientist... opens the door for a lot of possibilities, good start Mary!
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kinder06
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 new chapters.

new chapters of Martha Byrne and Solo are up.
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Originally posted by detwriter:
I agree with Mr. O, a nuclear scientist... opens the door for a lot of possibilities, good start Mary!


yes it will I hope you enjoy my stories.
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Seems like the action's heating up in Solo - and what a jerk that Cyrus is to our poor doctor Sad

Nice update with Martha Byrne, too! War veterans should certainly be wary of moms...they're downright terrifying if you rub them the wrong way. Looks like Martha's situation is getting worse and worse, too Confused Well done!
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Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Seems like the action's heating up in Solo - and what a jerk that Cyrus is to our poor doctor Sad

Nice update with Martha Byrne, too! War veterans should certainly be wary of moms...they're downright terrifying if you rub them the wrong way. Looks like Martha's situation is getting worse and worse, too Confused Well done!


thanks Orpheus.
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Goodness - the villains trying to slander Martha's good name and make her out to be a villain is incredibly devious! Though I'm sure you're right, Ford and Fallon would see right through that ruse...I hope Sad

As for Martha's escape - very well executed 8)
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 glad u like it

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Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Goodness - the villains trying to slander Martha's good name and make her out to be a villain is incredibly devious! Though I'm sure you're right, Ford and Fallon would see right through that ruse...I hope Sad

As for Martha's escape - very well executed 8)


thanks I'm glad you like it.
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 Next Chapter

Hey everyone the lastest chapter of Byrne is out.
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Hey everyone the lastest chapter of Byrne is out.


Very nice and your drawings are fantastic!
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Originally posted by kinder06:
Hey everyone the lastest chapter of Byrne is out.


Very nice and your drawings are fantastic!


Thanks so much!!
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Goodness, looks like a close call for Alex! Good thing she has friends in high places, otherwise she'd be neck-deep in trouble!

As for Martha...well, something feels a bit off about her driver. Though that might just be my paranoia kicking in again.

Great work Kinder!
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Post Tue Aug 25, 2009 11:18 pm 
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 thanks

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Goodness, looks like a close call for Alex! Good thing she has friends in high places, otherwise she'd be neck-deep in trouble!

As for Martha...well, something feels a bit off about her driver. Though that might just be my paranoia kicking in again.

Great work Kinder!


thansk so much
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 Solo Chapter Two

latest Chapter of Solo is up.
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Blue Brigades, huh? Seems like they have nothing but trouble planned for their poor hostage. And that can only lead to bigger trouble, what with that nuke and all.

Great work on the chemistry between ford and Fallon, too!
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quote:
Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Blue Brigades, huh? Seems like they have nothing but trouble planned for their poor hostage. And that can only lead to bigger trouble, what with that nuke and all.

Great work on the chemistry between ford and Fallon, too!


Thanks but what do you mean by chemistry with Dir Ford and SSA Fallon?
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Ah crap, I meant the two Fallons, sorry. Brain-farted when I was typing that Very Happy
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quote:
Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Ah crap, I meant the two Fallons, sorry. Brain-farted when I was typing that Very Happy


chemistry? I don't see that with them. Then again the story is not complete. Very Happy
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 lastest chapter of Martha Byrne

Chapter eight is Up
Post Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:51 am 
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I knew something was off with Henry. It's always the guy named Henry! Martha's in quite a bind, literally and figuratively - I wonder how she'll gain her reputation back, or if she even will?

And poor Alex manages to get out of one scrape and into another! Though it's nice you thought to escort her coaches out safely, Kinder Smile
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 more to come

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I knew something was off with Henry. It's always the guy named Henry! Martha's in quite a bind, literally and figuratively - I wonder how she'll gain her reputation back, or if she even will?

And poor Alex manages to get out of one scrape and into another! Though it's nice you thought to escort her coaches out safely, Kinder Smile


thank you,
Post Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:35 pm 
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 chapter nine

Chapter Nine is Up
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 the last chapter

the last chapter of MArtha Byrne will be posted soon.
Post Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:34 am 
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Aw, last chapter? A shame, this has been one hell of a ride, Kinder! Smile

Things are looking grim for Martha and Alex. It's thrilling to see that your protagonists have no one to trust now - and with your villains on the verge of success, you've managed to ratchet up the suspense!

Awesome work - I'm hoping Alex can get out alive, and Martha can get her reputation back Embarassed
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kinder06
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 final chapter of Martha Byrne

the last chapter of the Martha Byrne trilogy is done.

I hope all of you enjoyed the story.
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Wow, Martha Byrne is never rescued? She doesn't restore her good name? But...but that's sad! Crying or Very sad

It's good to see Alex is okay, though - that was a touching moment, to be sure! Smile But hell...what'll happen to Martha?

Killer work, Kinder, you've left me wondering just what the dickens is next (she'd better be okay)!
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kinder06
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quote:
Originally posted by Orpheus Kai:
Wow, Martha Byrne is never rescued? She doesn't restore her good name? But...but that's sad! Crying or Very sad

It's good to see Alex is okay, though - that was a touching moment, to be sure! Smile But hell...what'll happen to Martha?

Killer work, Kinder, you've left me wondering just what the dickens is next (she'd better be okay)!


Something to look forward too in 2010. Twisted Evil
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 Chapter Three of Solo

Chapter three is up.

Hope all of you enjoy it.
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